she caressed my soul,

with his words,

and stroked my mental with the fluidity of her pen,

I invited her to go deeper ,

The surface never held much resonance,

Lucky me?

Perhaps Lucky her.




  1. oh wow, this is good on so many levels. The interplay of pronouns, the imagery, the worldview, and the biggest of attractions (men & women!) A real weave of thought provoking….thought mixed finely with emotion. I really like it. Super work.

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